if
i
was
in
love
you
dont
care
its
jus
me
im
not
even
there
as
if
i
was
a
fly
buzzing
on
your
shoulders
im
only
one
person
im
jus
a
lonesum
all
ineed
is
jus
one
love
its
cold
i
cant
feel
no
more
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Dude. This is good. I'm not just saying that. I thought the format was going to ruin it, but it didn't. Very simple. To the point. Effective. Great ending too. Good job.
ReplyDeletelove it my brotha!
ReplyDeletetalk about voice and from the heart!
reading it was entertaining to haha im not good at reading up and down!
yo trev i know things are kinda of hard on yo
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